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Doodle for Google by ~laludia:iconlaludia:

Categories Designs & Interfaces > Logos & Logotypes

©2009-2010 ~laludia
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I was originally not going to post this, but I post this cause I want critique. I don't want people just say "ooh its awesome." I seriously want critique. I want to know what made this different from the winner of this year. I want to get better. :)

Thank you greatly if you do critique this. If you can't critique cause you're not a subscriber just comment it with critique.

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~gh927 May 22, 2009, 3:38:07 PM
ok just to mess with you ill say its cool. but for real it is quite good compared to what ive seen. the dragon g is very well done with a great color choice and your transition from water to land is smooth and you did a great job with making the land/water look like crumpled paper at the edges and the folds line up nicely
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~laludia May 22, 2009, 3:43:09 PM
Thank you for the good points. :D Can you honestly tell me about the bad points of this pic? The crumpled area is suppose to be cloth. But this is a fantasy themed base so it is also a portal to a "perfect world" because of the land and water that embeds in it. ^^

Thank you so much for commenting on it. :hug:

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~neschibi May 22, 2009, 3:45:12 PM
you should've told me about it earlier.. -feels hurt-there's nothing wrong with the coloring or anything lol- that part's amazing

anyways it would be better that you try a new idea instead of keepin the main focus to the creatures which seem to be the main focus of the picture- what was the theme this year again?

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Mood: Affection ~gh927 May 22, 2009, 3:46:24 PM
the only problem i have is that your earth is little weird on the right side other than that its fine. and cloth? oops i thoguht it was paper but it looks fine either way you see it.

your so very much welcome
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~laludia May 22, 2009, 3:48:55 PM
It's too ugly and I kinda hate it. Now I look at this the color is too popping out and such. D: I forgot the theme... XD

Okay, maybe it is the idea that messed me up. Thankies. :glomp:

ps: my sibling scratched me again ... in the eye. :(

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~TheAceOfSkulls May 22, 2009, 3:48:56 PM
The only bad points I can see are that some of the letters seem like there's parts missing on them (the L especially). Also, theres a similar problem near the O's. Otherwise, great design.

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~neschibi May 22, 2009, 3:57:20 PM
band-aid now

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~Misery-Silvers May 22, 2009, 4:12:24 PM
The only thing I can see wrong with it is that your background is a little odd, and your moon doesn't look right.

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~laludia May 22, 2009, 4:29:10 PM
no I don't need it :3

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~laludia May 22, 2009, 4:34:16 PM
thank you :D

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